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	<title>Comments on: on editing</title>
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		<title>By: erin</title>
		<link>http://erinmorgenstern.com/2008/09/on-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-26</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 01:29:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Reading it from start to finish is beginning to give me a headache, but reading it in short bits seems to be working. I&#039;m having difficulties with ordering scenes right now, but hopefully going through a few beta readers will help with that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reading it from start to finish is beginning to give me a headache, but reading it in short bits seems to be working. I&#8217;m having difficulties with ordering scenes right now, but hopefully going through a few beta readers will help with that.</p>
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		<title>By: Paul</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paul</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Sep 2008 11:28:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yay for progress! And it&#039;s really nice to come back to it with some distance, and find that you actually like it. It&#039;ll be interesting to read it all from start to finish, and see how you think it works as a whole.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yay for progress! And it&#8217;s really nice to come back to it with some distance, and find that you actually like it. It&#8217;ll be interesting to read it all from start to finish, and see how you think it works as a whole.</p>
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