Gather ’round, kidlets. Story time.

In 2003, I tried doing NaNoWriMo for the first time, because I’d always wanted to write but had never been good about sitting down and actually doing it. I had ideas in notebooks but nothing concrete.

I tried. I failed. Burnt out around 15k.

In 2004, I tried again. I made it to 50k that year. That novel is not a novel, it is a sprawling mess of post-apocalyptic… something.

In 2005, for NaNo #3, I had no plot but lots of atmosphere, and when I reached the 30k mark and had no idea where to go with it, I sent my characters to the circus.

In 2006, I spent NaNo working on that circus. I ended up with something interesting, but not novel-shaped.

In 2007, I did another 50k worth of work on the circus. In NaNo terms this is cheating. I’m sorry.

Throughout 2008 I took the 100k+ of circus… stuff and attempted to shape it into a novel.

I don’t know how many drafts it went through. Four, maybe? It started to have something resembling a proper shape in the beginning of 2009.

From 2008 to, well, now, I started learning about the publishing industry.

On June 2nd, 2009, I sent out my first batch of query letters.

I sent six queries out in that first batch. Within 20 minutes I had a partial request and a full request. I got another full request two hours later, two rejections the next day, and a third full request a few weeks later.

Ten days later those first two full request turned into rejections. The partial joined them in rejectionland soon after.

I sent out more queries. I got more requests. I got more rejections.

In August, I got a full request that turned into a phone call. A very nice phone call that I’m pretty sure I did nothing but stammer during, and was a request to rework the book almost entirely, but it was still an offer of representation.

I got in touch with the other agents who were still considering. Some of them passed. I had more phone calls. I think I stammered less in those.

I ended up not taking any offers at that point. I decided to revise independently, because everyone seemed to be saying different versions of the same thing.

I spent September and October of 2009 revising. I pushed around what I had. I tried to have more *stuff* happen. I polished it. I wrapped it up in pretty bows.

I sent it back to the three agents who wanted to see it.

More phone calls. More e-mails. All three of them said different versions of “well… not there yet.”

So I sighed. I ate a lot of chocolate. I wrote a completely different story for NaNo ’09. I took December off.

In January of 2010, I checked into the Revisionland Hotel.

I tore everything apart. I changed the format. I changed the plot. Well, I changed what little plot there was into an actual plot. I took over 25k out and put other stuff in. I sent it to old beta readers and new beta readers. I changed it some more.

I sent it back to agents two weeks ago.

Last week I had one offer of representation.

On Monday I had three.

I thought about it. A lot. I was extremely lucky to have three wonderful agents spending their time on me and my work, offering wonderful advice throughout this process.

In the end I signed with the same agent I had that very first stammering phone call with back in August.

I am now represented by Richard Pine of InkWell Management.

Almost exactly a year after I started querying.


clovia · May 27, 2010 at 1:32 pm


And I’ll keep saying it.


Rose Pressey · May 27, 2010 at 1:39 pm

Congrats again. You deserve it!

Jan O'Hara · May 27, 2010 at 1:50 pm

Congrats, Erin! Only goes to show what can be accomplished with thoughtful persistence.

sue (firedrake) · May 27, 2010 at 2:18 pm

I am so thrilled for you.
Congratulations. After all that time in the Revisionland Hotel, you really earned it!

Damien Walters Grintalis · May 27, 2010 at 2:25 pm

Congratulations! I’m glad all your hard work paid off.

Kristin Isaacs · May 27, 2010 at 2:26 pm

Erin – Congrats congrats congrats!! That is truly wonderful! Your perserverance is incredibly inspiring to me!!

Shelly · May 27, 2010 at 2:59 pm

OH YAY! Congratulations! I’m so excited for you!

Other Lisa · May 27, 2010 at 3:54 pm

Love it! There are many paths to Agented…Heh! And how cool that you ended up with the one you started with!

Helen (vfury) · May 27, 2010 at 5:24 pm

Congrats! I’m so excited for you.

phoenix · May 27, 2010 at 6:13 pm

Awesome story — thanks for sharing it!

Selena · May 27, 2010 at 6:45 pm


Leanan-Sidhe · May 27, 2010 at 10:37 pm

Such a great story! You really earned it!

Bluestone · May 28, 2010 at 12:26 pm

Loved the story, Erin. Thanks for sharing. Always good to understand others’ journeys. And, once again, CONGRATULATIONS!!

Debra Driza · May 28, 2010 at 8:30 pm

Amazing story, Erin–and obviously a testimony to your amazing talent that three agents were willing to work with you on this project for so long. 😉

WOOT for the Revisinland Hotel–when can you open a REAL one? Huh, huh?

Congrats again!

DeeSoul · May 28, 2010 at 10:07 pm

I’m so happy for you! Congratulations. The Revisionland Hotel is a wonderful place thanks to your lovely management of it. 🙂

Shveta · June 1, 2010 at 11:31 am

*jumps up and down with joy*

Where can I buy my ticket for the circus, huh, huh?


Sajidah · June 27, 2010 at 12:04 am

This story is fantastic. Thanks for sharing!

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